silverblaize

Quest For The Magical Cupcake

My first 8-bit song ever. Dont judge too hard, just tell me what is good and what is bad, and how to improve. Im only a n00b x)

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athleos : it's always great when people that don't know what they are doing stumble on interesting harmonies! you could easily work this into a great tune but i think it may be a little too advanced right at this moment. keep this one in your back pocket and then come back to it when you've got the basics mastered and you really have a grasp on what's going on here. this could be great with a little time!
at May 6th 2008, 06:57 PM

BeepBeepLOLZ : Dude melodies are in zee wrong key I used to do this all the time man, read up a bit about music theory even if its only basic stuff it will like help with composing and shizzle other than that I quite enjoyed it as a small taster of whats to come :] x
at March 19th 2008, 02:03 PM

SULLITRON : I think it's really good! One thing though, I think that when the bassline comes in it is one or two beats out of time. XD The melodies are great though! =D Awesome for a first tryyy.
at March 13th 2008, 12:14 PM

Taigeri : Yeah the key-change problem is a big one, it really does make the song sound very amateur (even though its your first attempt!) Its good, and changing the key to a matching one with the bassline and rhythm would make it really good! Great first attempt imo.
at March 11th 2008, 03:12 AM

Derris-Kharlan : good: its interesting, i like the bass. not so good: melody is in different key, and is there any chance of getting some drums in there? otherwise its a really solid first attempt. better than a lot ive heard
at March 11th 2008, 02:43 AM

Badjer : Yep, I would rework the overlay you put in there. It sounds kind of tacked on, and out of place.
at March 11th 2008, 02:26 AM

wedanced : you start off great but you go out of key for some reason.
at March 10th 2008, 02:37 AM

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