Cement Fist

Uploaded by Lynit. on November 15th 2009, 04:42 PM

New tune. Original :) Any comments or criticism would be greatly appreciated. Enjoy!

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  • Lynit. : STereochan: It's not panning to the right, for me. But thanks to you both :)
    on November 16th 2009, 05:23 PM
  • Cartoon Bomb : I think this is actually pretty cool...I agree with ST in that the intro could be cut a bit. Also, the end could use a little work (less abrupt), and maybe you could embellish the drums a bit more. The melodies are chaotic, sure, but it sounds good.
    on November 16th 2009, 11:32 AM
  • STereochan : starts a bit slow, ...I'm sorry, this doesn't cut it for me, the melodies seem a bit random and there's no real buildup or climax. Also, what's with everything being seemingly panned to the right?
    on November 16th 2009, 11:00 AM
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