gideo vame ZOMBIE-our first song on 8bc

Uploaded by FIVE TO THE EYES on June 9th 2009, 05:16 PM

this is our first song you might like it ..or it might suck. helpful hits are needed,ripping me a new asshole is not needed. oh and it was recorded on a shity 4 track...eq might be off!

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  • POWERLIFTER : get some more songs up!!!
    on February 13th 2010, 12:09 PM
  • CCrimson : Whoa!!! This is pretty awesome! Reminds me of Crystal castles with those vocals!
    on January 11th 2010, 10:02 AM
  • splashattack! : Your avatar is epic!
    on September 22nd 2009, 08:46 AM
  • Dot.AY : YES!! win .... Let us know how your first show goes .. as previously mentioned the vocals could be a little louder whilst remaining distorted and mufflebummed...
    on July 28th 2009, 08:42 PM
  • FIVE TO THE EYES : @Bunnymajs -i'll recheck the vox ,but I wanted it to sound like that really. i put a little distortion on there ,well a lot a one point. i'll tone it down and put it back up with a few other songs, next month.
    on July 12th 2009, 05:41 PM
  • Bunnymajs : it would sound better if the vocals did not sound like 3 kids half screaming through an old radio and if they were a tad louder then they are now :) apart from that.. it's quite nice!
    on July 12th 2009, 12:16 PM
  • axolotl : I live near SF! Wish I could make it to the show but that's too far for me to drive, I'm lazy. :P
    on July 12th 2009, 12:05 PM
  • FIVE TO THE EYES : hey guys that cool that you like the song!!!!! Axolotl- we live in LAS VEGAS and have our first show on the 31 of july ,too bad there's only a few people who even know about chiptune that live here.
    on July 9th 2009, 09:54 AM
  • 8-Bit Wonder : i love this song it sounds likeit should be off jet set radio future in my oppion which means its good :P nah keep the lyrics dude its fits well and i like it :P p.s zombies are the best (Y)
    on July 8th 2009, 11:57 AM
  • axolotl : Oh yeah, where are you located? Live show!
    on July 8th 2009, 11:41 AM
  • axolotl : I love you.
    on July 6th 2009, 10:54 PM
  • TREYFREY : I like this.
    on June 30th 2009, 07:20 PM
  • orion : i enojoyed this.
    on June 29th 2009, 04:19 PM
  • accentalpulse : the mix of vocals is great. I imagine the three of you front stage singing at (not to) the crowd. Which is a good thing
    on June 23rd 2009, 08:23 PM
  • FIVE TO THE EYES : i know were your coming from ....i'm 30 and i still play all kinds of music. this song was in retro spect to poke fun at the ''kids'' of today.....the words are super cheezy and easy to remember. the song gos ''power to the kids and all of that shit!''...i don't like these little fuckers ninja this or pirate that....sorry but ZOMBIES have been around since the 80's.....lol
    on June 16th 2009, 07:42 PM
  • Nestrogen : Well, thanks for the kind words. "hardcore style?" I HATE pirates,ninjas,and zombies... and FUCK THE KIDS! Other than that...and I hope that you understand where I am coming from... your stuff is pretty catchy.
    on June 15th 2009, 08:15 PM
  • coldfuse : That's true you have done that, but anyway before i overhaul this, i thought i would give better criticism than, not bad or a quite like this for a track that i think has great potential so i'm giving them ideas.
    on June 10th 2009, 09:13 AM
  • FIVE TO THE EYES : thats is nice of you coldfuse you took the time to right a lot of helpful ideas! And i'm happy if even just one person liked it! and we are not Crystal Castle but the vocal i want to go 4 the old school way of singing- Gina V. D'Orio from 8c8OR and others like Hanin Elias from ATR. we will have some idm sound in our music this was just a ''fun'' song .
    on June 10th 2009, 09:11 AM
  • CAG : Lighten up, I was just drawing attention to how detailed your feedback was. I don't think you should be that specific, though.
    on June 10th 2009, 08:56 AM
  • coldfuse : @CAG, its called helpful criticism, they obviously have put it up here for that, as i said it just needs a rework... not a complete redo, so why don't you just shut ur face?!
    on June 10th 2009, 08:40 AM
  • bullet flu : Song's really cool btw.
    on June 10th 2009, 06:44 AM
  • bullet flu : ha.
    on June 10th 2009, 06:42 AM
  • CAG : Why don't you just re-write the song, Coldfuse.
    on June 10th 2009, 06:01 AM
  • coldfuse : Ok guys, this is a really really good start. when i first heard those first few 10 seconds, my ears started picking up with pure excitement. Felt like something was seething underneath. I sort of thought it was going to merge into a bjork type of thing, but instead i can see you guys went for the Crystal Castle/Test icicles type of singing. Ok here's a few pointers, for one don't give up on this track. It's a winner for sure, just needs some proper mixing and a little sorting. The lyrics personally, i don't think is that bad at all. I quite enjoy them. I think the worst parts are your chours. It builds to a crescendo with 16ths and then has this mediocre chorus, which you seem to bring the snare in after what seems like 8 bars. Your chorus should be the explosive bit. At the moment i think its your weakest either bring in the bass more for the first 8 bars or have the snare come in earlier.. The melody, im not sure if its called an appegio?! but the one at the start i think is fantastic i would maybe use that a little more. The middle 8 section personally i think should mimic the start of the song, with that type of appegio melody with the 4 bar bass beat. Bring that it. I just think it looses its pace quite abit. Sort out the vocal mixing, making it a little clear and i think your on to a winner. Great attempt for the first go, very good attempt, one of my favs. looking forward to the next reincarnations.
    on June 10th 2009, 05:53 AM
  • Chipso Facto : nice title song and i also like your voice. no autotune. great job..
    on June 9th 2009, 11:48 PM
  • HANNAHMONTANATRON : Very nicely done :D Can't wait for moar
    on June 9th 2009, 10:50 PM
  • FIVE TO THE EYES : ok...ya your right mako i will rethink the lyrics come up with some better stuff. can you tell me (if any) parts of the lyrics are good and i should keep???...thanks 4 letting me know what you think of the song. jack
    on June 9th 2009, 08:29 PM
  • Mako : i like the vocals but the lyrics are really bad
    on June 9th 2009, 07:58 PM
  • FrancisIII : hahaah great job on the vocals.
    on June 9th 2009, 05:53 PM
  • FIVE TO THE EYES : a good comment from little-scale thats fucking rad....wow thanks. i love your music. Look out for more songs to come.
    on June 9th 2009, 05:47 PM
  • FIVE TO THE EYES : we use ableton and lsdj gb emulator . i just got a lsdj cart but have not got the songs on there yet ..the songs will sound better on my dmg-real 8-bit.
    on June 9th 2009, 05:45 PM
  • little-scale : Quite enjoyed this.
    on June 9th 2009, 05:39 PM
  • Dr. Zilog : This is actually really cool. Good job.
    on June 9th 2009, 05:35 PM
  • PizzaPastaTime : Not bad at all. What do you guys use?
    on June 9th 2009, 05:28 PM
  • FIVE TO THE EYES : hey thanks were new to the 8bc we have more songs soon!
    on June 9th 2009, 05:20 PM
  • D!4m0nD k!D : I LOVE THIS SONG!!! I WANNA HEAR MORE!!! =)
    on June 9th 2009, 05:18 PM
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