Cojiro

Something wrong a minute long.

My first try at chiptunes! Yay! Or auuughh. I don't know! It wasn't what I imagined making. It's angry and chaotic but while I was making it I started thinking it was far to repetitive and annoying. Now I've had a break and recorded it I don't dislike it quite so much but I still don't think it's very good... Oh well, learning process and all that! Enjoy! Or don't. Ya' know. :D Technical blah: DMG, Nanoloop 1.3 and some time on the train.

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Christopher Jion : add a 909 bassdrum to this and it'd be fucking wikkid.
at April 2nd 2008, 05:19 PM

Pandotrix! : It's pretty simple and quite repetitive, if you want to improve-as others have said, imrpove on the melody and I second MOD's comment about the flow. (: Keep trying though! Practise makes perfect! ^^
at April 2nd 2008, 06:11 AM

MOD : doesn't seem to have a flow to it and melody needs to be worked on, the say tone gets repititous very fast. but good first attempt. find a good flow and you'll be better
at April 2nd 2008, 04:57 AM

silverblaize : laser beam
at April 2nd 2008, 02:44 AM

PewPewLaserGun : o_o ? Dude improve your melodies at least =O.
at April 2nd 2008, 02:28 AM

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